The Fox and the Tiger

We are learning to understand the author’s point of view. Here is what I think the author is trying to tell us in this story.

quizz

what happened when Daniel got pot in the den? god sent down a angle to shut the lion mouth
who was the one who defeated?it was david
what happened when David  defeated Goliath?David got  Goliath sword and cut his head off 
we are learning to write a quizz for other to answer

shooting in the commorwleath games

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Punctuating Sports Paragraph

Here is my paragraph. Look and see where I have put the correct puncutation marks.

Unedited sports is usually a competitive physical activity sometimes sports are organised or just  for fun people are usually in teams and sometimes they are just for individuals sports  can help people to learn new skills and techniques and it can be heaps of fun too  sometimes sports is entertaining for participants and spectators how do you feel about  sports

Edited ‘sports is usually a competitive’ physical activity and is organised or just for fun. people  are usually in teams and sometimes they are just for individuals. Sports can help people  to learn new skills.And techniques and it can be heaps of fun too sometimes sports is  entertaining for participants. And spectators “how do you feel about sports”.

what for dinner

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SIR Edmund Hillary

In C.R.E. we talked about Edmund Hillary he was the first one 
to climber the highest mountain in the world. That mountain is called Mount Everest we are learning to make good choices   

Have I not commanded you? Be strong and courageous. Do not be afraid; do  be discouraged, for the Lord your  God will be with you wherever you go.”

In C.R.E we saw  a Brad Dring he was a reaper  he 
is cool. then we sang  a song the song name is calld
my god is so big. and then we say a Prayer that is the end of C.R.E.