Thursday, 7 August 2014

Punctuating a paragraph

“Go” yelled Dad. he was yelling at the T.V while watching the boxing during the commonwealth games. Dad was watching very intensely David Nyika looked strong boom! His opponent was knocked to the ground “hooray” we all shouted David won gold and he is a champion wow I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.

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