team 4

WALT: writing introduction that orientate and hook in our audience.

first try:

This term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise is our project for this team . In our trade and enterprise groups we have six groups that make stuff like Toys, Food, Instruments, Homeware and Custom stationery. Do you` know what we use for our money? We use pt and pieces for our money to  buy anything you want but you have to make a order if you want one.

With a ?:

Do you know what we use for money? We use pt and pieces for our money to  buy anything you want but you have to make a order if you want one.come buy one it for sale!

With a !:

This term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise. In our trade and enterprise groups we have six groups that make stuff like Toys, Food, Instruments, Homeware and Custom stationery. Do you` know what we use for our money? buy one and come over!

With a fact:

This term team 4 have been learning about trade and enterprise is our project for this team to make saff and sall staff . In our trade and enterprise groups we have six groups that make stuff like Toys, Food, Instruments, Homeware and Custom stationery. Do you` know what we use for our money? We use pt and pieces for our money to  buy anything you want but you have to make a order if you want one.We save our pt for week 8 we will have a market day.